All "Intro Video" Editing Notes

How to Edit -- Notes -- 

Note 1:

IMPORTANT -- WHILE DOING THIS, DO NOT MOVE ANY SEGMENTS.  ONLY CUT AND DELETE EMPTY SPOTS OR BAD SEGMENTS YOU KNOW YOU WON'T USE.  THE CLIPS MUST REMAIN LINED UP UNTIL ALL NOTES ARE FINISHED AND THE EDITING PLAN HAS BEEN INITIATED.

Note 2:

Recordings are often going to have some sentences that are said more than once -- so there's double, triple, etc takes in the same recording.  In those cases, IT WILL BE SIMPLEST TO ONLY NOTE THE BEST TAKE.  Otherwise it can get very confusing in the table.

Also, the reason for most of these multi-takes is that I felt like the inital one felt shitty to begin with.  So usually note worth noting anyways.

If you want to keep it, multiple versions of the same thing will have a "**" note.
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TRACK 1 (a041) - First Half

Timestamp	Text of Segment	Evalutation
0:30 - 0:48	start - never heard about before	SOLID
0:49 - 1:14	... - difficult days...	solid, but down tempo
1:14 - 1:19	...look, ur wasting time rsch ins right now...	GOOD, just maybe a little harsh
1:42 - 1:58	...all those pills - lifetime of refreshing sleep...	fairly good
2:02 - 2:21	...I had - what was epiphany?...	maybe a little too pitchy, not bad
2:21 - 2:46	..ephif.. - you never known why this happens	weak
2:46 - 3:07	... - x1000 more difficult	good
3:07 -  3:30	... - don't want you to know	bad
3:49 - 4:03	youtube handoff	very good!
5:27 - 5:37	aweber handoff	decent

TRACK 2 (a042) - First Half

Timestamp	Text of Segment	Evalutation
0:00 - 0:22	You're about - never heard before	Good, "professional" style
0:22 - 0:30	... - tips that never work at all? (Q1)	Good
0:57 -  1:03	Q2	Good
1:07 - 1:17	Q3	WEAK Ending, but good otherwise
... - 1:21	Looking ur wasting ur time	SOLID
1:26 - 1:33	All those pills - WHY they are failing.	Good
1:33 - 1:43	sure, many - lifetime of refreshing sleep	BAD
1:43 - 1:54	I had a severe case - cure it myself	meh, not as good
1:54 - 2:03	Ephifany... - cured within weeks	SOLID
2:03 - 2:23	so what ephif? - feel more awake	BAD
2:26 - 2:49	You've noticed - wired to prevent sleep	Very Good
2:49 - 3:09	To cure ur ins - more difficult to get	Good
3:12 - 3:21	if you want to cure - pill co's no want	Okay
3:25 - 3:38	Youtube handoff	Good
3:54 - 4:05	aweber handoff 1	SEE THEORY* -- Best one I'd say
4:05 - 4:15	aweber handoff 2	Good but not great via theory

*Theory on handoff:
-Putting myself in the place of a lead that is facinated with my content: A strong, stern, unemotional, assumptive handoff seems to be the best way to go here.  Because my customers are going to be the ones thinking "I should learn more".  Sounding happy with the handoff makes them think - it lets them off the hook instead of pushing them at a critical moment.

TRACK 3 (a044) - First Half

Timestamp	Text of Segment	Evalutation
00 - 0:18	00 - never heard about before	SOLID AF
0:21 - 0:45	Let me just ask you - ALL 3 Q's	SOLID - needed excitement @ start
1:16 - 1:25	Q3 take 2**	better start, worse finish
1:25 - 1:47	Look, wasting time - lifetime sleep	Bad
1:50 - 1:59	Sure, many giev temp relieft - lifetime sleep*	Good
2:09 - 2:23	i had severe ins - breakthrough ephif	Good
2:23 - 2:38	i had severe ins - cured within weeks**	SOLID
2:40 - 3:02	so what ephif? - u've never known WHY this	SOLID
3:15 - 3:25	it cuz - ONLY happens when SLOWS down	Fairly good
3:29 - 3:47	it cuz - wired to prevent deep sleep	meh
3:57 - 4:16	to cure - 1000x more difficult	Good
4:18 - 4:23	if you want - you need REAL ans. (ends)	SOLID
4:32 - 4:34	"if you want to cure your insomnia"** (CUT)	SHITTY, but the next part is solid!
4:34 - 4:54	you need REAL ans - YOUTUBE HANDOFF	SOLID
5:00 - 5:10	aweber handoff 1	Good
5:11 - 5:22	aweber handoff 2**	Good

TRACK 4 (a045) - (Only has first half)

Timestamp	Text of Segment	Evalutation
00 - 0:06	00 - why sleep is SO difficult	SOLID AF, Non-pitchy Excitement
0:06 - 0:17	hi im james - never heard about before	sub-par
0:19 - 0:32	Q1 - Q2	SOLID AF, pro status
0:53 - 1:03	Q3	SOLID beginning, no Q @ end
1:04 - 1:16	Look - why they are failing	Good -- has a less aggressive "wasting time" that may be the way to go...
1:17 - 1:25	Sure, many giev temp relieft - lifetime sleep*	Good
1:25 - 1:41	i had ins - weeks of discovery	Bad, sounds fake
1:42 - 2:22	so what ephif? - wired to prevent sleep	SOLID AF
2:33 - 3:01	to cure ur ins - sleeping pill co's dont want	SOLID
3:01 - 3:18	Youtube handoff	SOLID
3:42 - 3:57	Youtube handoff 2 **	Start = SOLID AF, End not as good
4:00 - 4:15	Youtube handoff 3**	SOLID AF
4:36 - 4:44	aweber handoff	Good
4:45 - 4:54	aweber handoff 2 **	SOLID

TRACK 5 (a046) - (Only has first half)

Timestamp	Text of Segment	Evalutation
00 - 0:06	00 - why sleep so difficult	DIFFERENT, but doubtful... bleh
0:06 - 0:17	hi im james - never heard about before	SOLID AF
0:17 - 0:23	Q1	SOLID AF
0:25 - 0:41	Q2 - Q3	Meh, too salesy
0:47 - 1:04	look, wasting time - lifetime sleep	SOLID - and less aggro style
1:05 - 1:20	i had ins - weeks of discovering	PRO, but too salesy
1:26 - 2:01	so what ephif? - wired to prevent deep sleep	SOLID
2:01 - 2:06	to cure need - and HOW to change it	SOLID AF
2:06 - 2:20	the kicker is - 1000x	Good
2:22 - 2:31	if you want - pill co's no want	Good
2:31 - 2:40	if you want - pill co's no want**	Fairly Solid
2:44 - 2:59	Youtube Handoff	SOLID
3:03 - 3:10	aweber Handoff	Good

TRACK 6 (a047) - (Only has first half)

Timestamp	Text of Segment	Evalutation
00 - 1:13	00 - dr clueless so i cure myself	ALL TOO SALESY
1:13 - 1;22	it took yrs of research - cured within weeks	SOLID AF
1:22 - 1:40	so what ephif? - feel more awake	Fairly good, too down tempo
1:43 - 1:52	"but the very act..." - you've noticed b4	SOLID
1:52 - 2:14	its cuz, goto bed - mind's wired - HOW to chg	SOLID
2:35 - 2:50	Youtube handoff	Very SOLID
2:50 - 2:58	aweber handoff	SOLID
3:00 - 3:03	Thanks, and I'll see you in a minute.	Good, too rushed though
3:05 - 3:07	Thank you.  And I'll see you in a minute.**	Better, not great
3:09 - 3:11	Thanks, and I'll see you in a minute.**	SOLID, a little too quiet